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disjunction by ~jaggy:iconjaggy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Happiness, his own creation
It should take more than one hit
To bring about its destruction
To create this ruin

Emotions cut deeper than steel
Death-metal the only salvation
To bring down the destroyer
To find each other

Sometimes, nothing matters but you
The rest of the time I am failing.
©2003-2009 ~jaggy
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~sweet-agony Feb 2, 2003, 9:25:34 AM
oh. this was so sad. i like the whole death metal and steel allusions. they make this feel really cold. and the last two lines... outstanding jaggy

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Meanwhile I talk to myself, as one who has plenty of time. No one tells me anything new; so I tell myself to myself.
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~gaston Feb 2, 2003, 11:08:58 AM
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this poem seems quite obscure too me. i do "get" it, but i must say that the core meaning escapes me, which is actually good, for the author has to have some elements exclusively just for himself to call the poem his own.

peace.
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human rights for all
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~greendragon Feb 14, 2003, 8:51:45 AM
Sometimes, nothing matters but you
The rest of the time I am failing.

sometimes, you sound just like me.
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~greendragon Feb 14, 2003, 8:51:57 AM
or maybe i sound just like you.
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